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Saturday, December 1, 2012

Understanding the difference between the "Active": and "Passive" voice

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As budding writers, we often get caught up in a grammatical quagmire while trying to decide between the "Active": and "Passive" voice when writing copy. The rule of thumb, is that the active voice is always better...

The Subject Is Doing The Action

When we are using the "Active" voice, it simply means having the subject of the sentence do all the acting. For example: Richard fitted two separate speakers, so the sound could be alternated between the dining-room and the patio. In this sentence "Richard" is being the subject, The action he performed is “fitted” and “speakers” is the object in the sentence, describing what Richard has fitted. Another example would be: Paul hit a home run the second time at bat. In this sentence "Paul", the subject, did the "hit", the action.

Using The ":Active" Voice

When we use the "Passive" voice, the subject of the sentence is not acting. A plain example: The door is being closed by me. In this scenario, the "door" is the subject but the action “closed” is being done by me. While this sentence is grammatically correct, it is difficult for most average people to understand. Regardless of who your targeted audience is, making use of the "Active" voice is always better. Most grammar-checkers can be set to highlight sentences using the "Passive" voice.

When To Use The "Passive" Voice

There certainly are times when a writer has to use the passive voice. These instances, will be, for example, when the writer does not know who or what is doing or did the action. For instance, a crime journalist may write that the woman's dead body was found around 2 am., Saturday morning. The writer does not know how the woman had died, all he knows is that she was found on Saturday morning around 2 am. The rule is not to use the "Passive" voice unless it is categorically unavoidable.

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